[創作] I smell the fragrance of a flower

[cantare (小米家)]

I smell the fragrance of a flower

Near the branch which has a bird

Listening the valley's sound around my ears

Suddenly I totally understand.

Nothing is certainly I cannot bear.

When I just a naive kid

I tell myself I can be there.

Although I will face more challenges indeed

I shouldn't so afraid of my fear.

Behold the lay of light piercing clouds

I see my dream just waits for me there,

And I see the almighty Lord

He grins at me once again

Finally I think I discovered

Such a great thing lives on the earth.


第一次寫英詩，希望各位給不才小弟意見
這可算是詩嗎?

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