[創作] I am not Emily Dickinson

[cantare (小米家)]

Poetic license

I do not have

Some grammetical errors

always haunt me at night

Sould I be isolated?

like a hermit

shallow and multi-faced

I want to omit

I just want to be a words-

worth person
                                                                                                                               worth person
Do not let pebbles in the yard

conceal my talent


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推 fraviii:GRAMMATICAL
推 spacedunce5:actually, not that bad
推 celestial09:You shouldn't be discouraged!
→ celestial09:grammar can be learned, it just
→ celestial09:takes time. Be prepared to be wrong
→ celestial09:, it's no big deal. Meticulousity
→ celestial09:kills creativity. So well.... :)
推 spacedunce5:does anyone else the irony here??
推 celestial09:什麼irony呀?我怎麼沒感覺到? =.=
→ celestial09:是我太遲鈍嗎? XD
→ celestial09:不會是在諷刺我吧?嗄? XD 我沒感覺也
→ celestial09:反正CJ 也是好心幫我們改錯誤ㄚ
→ celestial09:那很好ㄚ~ 無所謂啦~~  XD