[創作] Dun need your salvation

[fleuve (哈) :)]

After reading the above poems, I envy everybody so much for your such
beautiful poems.

The poem below was just a memo to my dearest...well, shall I call him
friend?

And that was the first time I tried to write this kind of thing...

It was written this June, when I was still stuck in that terrible JCEE exam.
I just thought of him, thinking about his leaving, our interactions and
things happened during the so-called one and a half year.

We had quarrels with each other, and he sometimes just being callous,
pretending that i didn't exist if i didn't talk to him first = ="
So most of the time in my point of view, he's kinda "inconceivable"
or "unbearable."  XDD   But he was actually a very nice person; he cared
about me very much.


`Cause it's the first time I write this kind of thing (I even seldom write
poems in Chinese XD), the words and structure I use would be just very
simple.

So if you have any comment, just let me know.  Thanks!

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Dun need your salvation

Dun know yet to cry
After hearin your leavin
and words you spoke to me
`Cause I relied too much on thee
that for so many years I even forget how to fly

What would happen then
if there's nothing forin me to stay behind

Shall I just walk away
and breathe your lie?

--
    生命的意義不在追求答案，答案只是另一個答案的問題，
    生命在於去體會與經歷，不管生活在哪裡。
                                                   ╭╮───╪───╭╮
                                                    ＊     fleuve     ＊
                                                   ╰╯───╪───╰╯

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※ 編輯: fleuve          來自: 218.166.206.45       (10/11 07:07)
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