[創作] Something follows me home－

[frolicker (像孩子般)]

Something follows me home－
Again－as an Owner－
It darkens my World－arbitrarily－
Permeates and covers－

I cannot see, but sense－
It crawls close to me－and onto me－
Slavering－
Then comes the Spooky Leisure

My Soul struggles hard－so confined－
Screaming for a Flight
Painful is my Body to restrain－
So willful a Soul

While my Nerves dance－unrestrained－
As if to celebrate－
The Opening Ceremony of－
Some kind of Unrest

As expected－the Show begins－
Overwhelmingly－
The Drum－beats aloud and rapidly－
Like a Heart

The Performer unseen－on the darkest stage－
Performs an Awful Feeling－
Therewith I can feel－
The Weight of my Heart

At length the Show is ended－
Then－the calm of Nerves
And the silence of Soul－
The Thing is conquered－by Numbing Despair







p.s. I did turn off the light of my apartment in the evening so as to feel the
     loneliness with fear while I was composing it. The poem is apparently
     based on an imitational style of my favorite poet, Emily Dickinson.
     Hope you like it!


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◆ From: 111.243.212.111
推 dieEule:love the fourth stanza
→ frolicker:thanks~^^
※ 編輯: frolicker       來自: 111.243.217.177      (12/07 22:04)
※ 編輯: frolicker       來自: 111.243.215.249      (12/08 09:37)
推 yuuyh:The revision gets better and better.
→ yuuyh:(I guess i've seen the very earlier ver.)
→ frolicker:hah, right before u posted ur comment
→ frolicker:I again revised once...I always can't
→ frolicker:wait to post my poems but later find
→ frolicker:out lots of flaws. thx for commenting
※ 編輯: frolicker       來自: 111.243.214.221      (12/08 22:25)
→ quoth:Tired+thrilling=illusion.Excellent poem~
→ frolicker:thx so much!!! ˊˇˋ