作者frolicker (像孩子般)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Bestest
時間Wed Nov 17 20:24:45 2010
After a gay feast with best friends
Everyone frolicked in great merriment
Cheers and drinking without ends
But you and me just stayed quiescent
Such wonderful heat when we felt it-
The rays from us fully connected
So fiery that could make the sun quit
Having our brains and hearts melted
It was warm to involve in a happy time
Yet warmer to create one of ourselves
In which the spiritual chat were a rhyme
The rhymed words jumped as dancing elves
It was also a great work of fiction
Whose ending still made us its readers
Who kept on being in the great emotion
And desiring some more chapters
And it's only between you and me
Whose mingled minds are so manifest
Them as my best friends indeed I do see
But you'll always be the bestest of the best!
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推 spacedunce5:before the last stanza i thought it 61.228.83.60 11/17 20:28
→ spacedunce5:was a lover 61.228.83.60 11/17 20:28
→ frolicker:a confidant is somewhat like a lover~111.243.213.174 11/17 21:03
→ celestial09:推 gay ^^220.130.185.239 11/20 19:57
→ celestial09:Gone are the days when we were220.130.185.239 11/20 19:57
→ celestial09:young and gay~ ^^220.130.185.239 11/20 19:57
→ frolicker:haha, you 推 a weird word~111.243.216.187 12/05 14:43