精華區beta poetry 關於我們 聯絡資訊
I'm the Land; you're the Sea- We're a Union of Eternity; You give me smooth waves- So soothing the touches, And I return you my granules of skin. Your vast, as mine, as Mind, But turbulent is your deep- Unrest is your inner nature While you're steadied by me, Flowing into my deep of Solidity. And your flow without firmness- Such intriguing mobile emotions Moisten my Sense straight and stiff; Hence my solid inner slimes and streams, Fluidified and with you mixed. We're blended into a Marriage Pledged without a pledging ring or sheet, Embracing not the worldly kind of love; In our wedding, Faith is the priest, Witnessing our Marriage of an Infinite Friendship. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.243.212.69 ※ 編輯: frolicker 來自: 111.243.214.152 (12/30 08:49)
dieEule:"And I return you my granules of skin" 140.112.185.64 12/30 13:32
dieEule:perfect! 140.112.185.64 12/30 13:32
sophiacccc:樓上不分享很可惜也...XD 寫那麼好 114.36.55.169 12/30 15:46
frolicker:i'm so flattered! :D111.243.213.141 12/30 17:00
frolicker:sophiacccc, you're so nice a praiser111.243.213.141 12/30 17:03
frolicker:who praises other's talent twice111.243.213.141 12/30 17:06
frolicker:under someone's poems made out of111.243.213.141 12/30 17:08
frolicker:great pains!111.243.213.141 12/30 17:09
sophiacccc:I like yours as well ^^ 114.36.55.169 12/30 17:32
sophiacccc:both great poems :D 114.36.55.169 12/30 17:32
frolicker:hahaha, thank you!! XDD111.243.214.152 12/30 21:57