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Something happened but forgotten I recall the flash and the noise It's all too speedy and without choice After that, in sleep I'm fallen The sleep is the soundest one ever In which I have the prettiest silent dream My every beloved is around with a beam Despite the surroundings alabaster There are also those never seen now again Who'd been in my life and gone Am I caught in a beautiful con? May God bless me, Amen! The scent of tasty food pervades the air From the kitchen-the scent familiar I know it's the food made by my fair mother So daily and so rare I expect mother to come out smiling But why do I see her cry? Which seemingly nothing can mollify That's the moment I start yelling Yet, I still do not hear a voice Suddenly, my whole dream becomes pale Suddenly, I can hear mother's wail And her waking me up with big noise Mama, mama, stop wailing quite I feel your wake and your hands hold like vise Alright, alright, I'm now about to rise Submissively, to the Light The Light so bright So forceful the Might I wonder if it's the Morning Light Or a Mourning Sight -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.243.212.68
spacedunce5:beautiful! 61.228.79.110 12/05 19:26
frolicker:thx! :)111.243.212.111 12/05 20:59
spacedunce5:atch for typo tho 61.228.79.110 12/05 23:35
frolicker:~!#@$%^&*()P)(*%^$ 111.243.212.68 12/06 01:21
spacedunce5:w 61.228.74.57 12/06 01:59
spacedunce5:like the penultimate line 61.228.74.57 12/06 01:59
frolicker:hahaha, i get it now~XD thanks!111.243.216.187 12/06 11:29
※ 編輯: frolicker 來自: 111.243.216.187 (12/06 11:30)
spacedunce5:wander? wonder? 140.112.7.59 12/06 13:29
frolicker:ahahahaha~=ˇ=111.243.212.111 12/06 21:13
※ 編輯: frolicker 來自: 111.243.212.111 (12/06 21:13)