[創作] Another two wishes

[hahastarr (漫步中的哈哈星人)]

Could I please have a box of chocolates that are
Made of your feelings and dreams so
I could feed myself with those when
You keep saying you're alright but
I just don't believe it
?


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Could I please have a jar of pills that are
Made of your smell and whispers so
I could sleep away the pain of
Missing you too often and
Too much
?




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推 darksign:Good stuff! But IMHO scent would sound
→ darksign:better than smell. xD
→ hahastarr:cheers mate I was going to use the
→ hahastarr:word 'scent' but I found it too +ve &
→ hahastarr:pleasant and thats not a word I wanna
→ hahastarr:use on a guy.  Somehow the word keeps
→ hahastarr:reminding me of the film 'Scent of a
→ hahastarr:woman', funny huh?!
→ hahastarr:xD
推 darksign:oh dear... a guy? lol
→ spacedunce5:scent of a woman +1