精華區beta poetry 關於我們 聯絡資訊
**FORE-NOTE: This poem is consisted of my original work and an already existing song. The lyrics (here in blue) are in Spanish, and I have put down beneath each stanza the exact English translation (in gray)I used as reference during the making of this poem, as the song itself is connected with and represents the emotional aspect of the entire poem. The song is "Regresa a mi" from Il Divo, and much inspiration had come from the band as well. *************************************************** I never saw this coming. Sorrowful eyes, quivering lips The delicate hand that slipped down my face And slipped away into the darkness alone. No me abandones asi Hablando solo de ti Ven y devuelveme al fin la sonrisa que se fue (Don't leave me here like this I speak only of you In the end only you can bring back the smile that went away) Your raven hair, sliding out of my hand Silken petals the night breeze carried Along with them the lingering scent I try so hard to keep Una vez mas tocar tu piel y hondo suspirar Recuperemos lo que se ha perdido (To touch your skin once again and sigh deeply We can recoverwhat we have lost) Now I walk with my brothers in Roma's streets Smiling to the camera, I cannot hear their laughter A blood red rose against my black suit A single rose in the night Regresa a mi, quiereme otra vez Borra el dolor que al irte me dio Cuando te separaste de mi (Return to me, love me once again Erase the pain your leaving gave me when you separated from me) Four roses for the gentlemen All at the cathedral door resting One rose near my heart The only one that's missing Dime que si Yo no quiero llorar Regresa a mi (Tell me why I don't want to cry Return to me) In this cafe full of chattering strangers As foreign as this newspaper I find My pocket watch stares back at me mockingly As my hopes elope with time Extrano el amor que se fue Extrano la dicha tambien Quiero que vengas a mi y me vuelvas a querer (It's strange that his love has gone Strange, and she also says this I want you to come back to me and to want me once again) The sweet murmurs outside my window do not reach my ear Nor returns the normal life once I held so dear Just like the rose I placed on my desk -- It is no longer there No puedo mas si tu no estas tienes que llegar Mi vida se apaga sin ti a mi lado (I can't go on anymore if you don't want to come back My life is for you to be here beside me) The passionate sun of Italia brings no light to the heart I lost Deep into the ocean blue Among the people seeing me off, how I long to see those eyes - Those lively eyes that belong to you Regresa a mi, quiereme otra vez Borra el dolor que al irte me dio Cuando te separaste de mi Dime que si Yo no quiero llorar Regresa a mi (Return to me, love me once again Erase the pain your leaving gave me when you separated from me Tell me why I don't want to cry Return to me) Aimlessly I walk about the streets Distant voices sieging my ears Desperately I fight to hold in This searing pain I cannot bear No me abandones asi Hablando solo de ti Devuelveme la pasion de tus brazos (Don't leave me here like this I speak only of you Bring back the passion of being in your arms) On stage standing side by side Singing we let our feelings slip A wave of emotion swallows me whole I taste salty tears on my lips Regresa a mi, quiereme otra vez Borra el dolor que al irte me dio Cuando te separaste de mi Dime que si (Return to me, love me once again Erase the pain your leaving gave me when you separated from me Tell me why) With a thread of hope, I search the dark audience Yo no qiero llorar Borra el dolor que al irte me dio Cuando te separaste de mi Dime que si (I don't want to cry Erase the pain your leaving gave me when you separated from me Tell me why) And see - Dime que si (Tell me why) -- no hint of the red rose That once belonged to me Regresa a mi Regresa a mi (Return to me Return to me) Return to me. *********************************************** As always, comments and feedbacks are very welcome!! Thank you!!! -- 他們說... 左撇子不是天才就是白痴......我想, 我應該屬於後者吧~~~~~ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 219.91.108.63
Chiwaku:speaking only of you? ven = come! 210.85.16.174 09/10
dale:好久不見……仔細拜讀中。:D 218.166.92.135 09/10
hecati:please pardon the translation part, my Spanish 219.91.81.254 09/10
hecati:is not very bright, and I picked a version 219.91.81.254 09/10
hecati:which isn't very accurate (word-by-word) but 219.91.81.254 09/10
hecati:genrally tells the story.... 219.91.81.254 09/10
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