[創作] A Tear in the Wing

[hecati (Do not feed the Dirtman)]

It was a tear in the wing.
Not unbearable pain. Just
enough to remind you it happened, now and then.

The rain sprinkled down numbly,
just because
it was appropriate.


So I went out for a spin.
The air held me like a damp, over-zealous fleece blanket.


So I went to the studio,
to make my own thunder.
Uno, dos TRES. Cuatro, cinco, SEIS.

Thor would have been proud.



If I put a rainbow band-aid on the slit,
would it heal faster?



--
We are the artists of the time,
we dream in sculpture, dream in rhyme.
For you we bring our world alive,
so something will survive.

--
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※ 編輯: hecati          來自: 140.122.108.20       (06/21 17:17)
→ spacedunce5:推詩跟簽名檔！
推 spacedunce5:補推
推 yuuyh:推 I like the Thor line.
→ hecati:回樓上：因為有沾到神話嗎？  XD Thank you both, btw ;)
推 hahastarr:like like like :D
→ hecati:Thanks! :)
推 yuuyh:I like the shortness and bluntness of that line. The
→ yuuyh:allusion is of course a pleasant surprise, which adds
→ yuuyh:extra force to that line.
→ hecati:I see...many thanks for your comment!
→ spacedunce5:應該是 would have 吧?
※ 編輯: hecati          來自: 140.112.25.132       (06/24 20:31)
→ hecati:My gosh. Thanks. I really need to brush up my grammar:P