[創作] A SONNET

[HACK (究極藝術頭文字井)]

 Michelle, my pretty and mild kitty.
 When I softly fondle thou,
 All I think is how to make thee happy.
 Good gracious! My love for thee has been deep so!

 Michelle, oh my glamorous Michelle.
 When thou leave me to play with something new,
 Distantly watching you with pleasure.
 Do thou konw how I care about you?

 Oh Michelle, the only treasure of mine.
 Forever I will love thee with all my heart,
 Even I never live in thy mind.
 Thy presence has made my gray life bright.

 So poor man to fall for the apathetic cat.
 However, if this is his well, why not?              --- J.L

我英文還蠻差的....所以文法上也不知道對不對0.0....
如果有什麼需要修改的還請大家多多指教 :)

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剛開始嘗試寫詩....其實還蠻多不懂的@@a....
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