[創作] Your eye

[imlazy (dear fear)]

Depression makes you cry
All the sadness full of your eye
Under your eyeball is my arduous try
Your tears dry
As the parachute fly
Solitude your thought maybe quiet
Let your stubborn shackle alright
And I will be the light
Illuminate your eye for a while.


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