[創作] Cats in Cages

[korn31910 (浮出水面的大肚貓)]

Locked in the rest homes blue and red
They do not talk, but eat
And sleep
With eyes blank
Watch the people in the street
Come and go
Talking about how expensive
Should a American shorthair be

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※ 編輯: korn31910       來自: 61.229.132.24        (03/05 16:28)
※ 編輯: korn31910       來自: 61.229.132.24        (03/05 16:32)
推 EddyGuitar:I deem the cats in your work are
→ EddyGuitar:personified, which is interesting.
※ 編輯: korn31910       來自: 61.229.132.24        (03/05 16:37)
→ korn31910:Thanks a lot!
推 EddyGuitar:In terms of techniques, I'd like to
→ EddyGuitar:suggest using more words related to
→ EddyGuitar:cats' species-unique movements.
→ EddyGuitar:By so doing, you may highlight the
→ EddyGuitar:images in the audience in a sharper,
→ EddyGuitar:more vigorous brush.
→ EddyGuitar:This is a central tech I've been
→ EddyGuitar:working hard on, called cohesion.
※ 編輯: korn31910       來自: 220.139.220.8        (03/06 10:31)