推 dale:很讚，節奏像在車上一樣 09/30 10:22
推 hahastarr:I hate parting OwQ 09/30 12:08
推 spacedunce5:enjambment的效果很令人窒息！ 09/30 16:35
推 hwuna:窒息+1 09/30 22:30
There's only silence on the bus
Unlike before, as we were
Talking and laughing, sometimes
Blamed by sleepy passengers
So short the time and our way home
30 minutes, how small it is to a day
But so happy I were, I guess you too
Secrets we shared, jokes we spoke
Were taken away when you left
Like the other passengers, always
I dive into a full blank called
SLEEP
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