[創作] An Innocent Love Song

[korn31910 (羅拔)]

I buy you a shrimp
You sing me a song


You send me a plum
I write you a poem

So let us grow, like unicorns
Playing hide and seek in the real world

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→ korn31910:a revision of "A Fictional Love Song"
推 yuuyh:一二段的感覺讓我想到詩經，或許那種節奏跟你/我對比吧
→ yuuyh:不過我有點忘記是詩經的哪一首了(面壁...)
推 hahastarr:Why a shrimp?
→ hahastarr:I wanna buy my turtle a shrimp!
推 spacedunce5: 令人莞爾
推 hecati:有，光看前兩段會有一種 "啊，詩經翻譯！" 的fu~ XD
→ korn31910:'Cause I like shrimp XD
推 yuuyh:"shrimp" has a good sound, and echoes well with "plum"
→ yuuyh:and "poem." They all have this delicious labial sound~
→ yuuyh:想到詩經還有另一個原因: 一二段每行都只有5個syllables XD