作者korn31910 (羅拔)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Goodbye Isn't the Last Word You Spoke
時間Tue Sep 18 17:02:14 2012
Goodbye isn't the last word you spoke
But a song, so old
I heard you singing it all night long
On the upper floor
I knew, you were recollecting time
And secrets never told
93 years, a tree can grow up tall
Now we are standing in front of you
Sighing, against the flood
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※ 編輯: korn31910 來自: 118.161.151.144 (09/18 18:26)
推 hecati:I find it simple and beautiful~ Thanks for sharing :) 09/18 18:29
推 yuuyh:The last 2 lines are interestingly ambiguous. 09/18 20:46
推 spacedunce5:love this 09/18 21:20
推 pcchuckwu:Sadness as vague but true. Nice work. 09/18 23:38