精華區beta poetry 關於我們 聯絡資訊
Missing You why? I was attracted by you at the first sight Why? You are in my heart all the time Why? My memory always has a girl dressed red Why? You are at the place where I can't find Why? I saw you when closing my eyes Because You'll always in my mind Let me try I'll take care of you all my life -- 這是好久以前的作品了(大概六年前吧XD不過我現在才升大四)很簡單的押韻詩:P 裡面有個red純粹是為了紀念那個女孩 不然改成white會更押韻XDD 閒晃看到有這個版 於是就斗膽PO過來了XD -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 203.67.106.12
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