[創作] Pain

[mrshoward (飄泰泰)]

A thousand-horsed ambition
Galloping toward a vast sea;
Passion sits like an ignorant frog
In tepid water broiling up.
Tears shed from outside in:
A flood welled up with no relief.
A four-legged heart in captivity,
Immersing into the dimension of apathy.
Squeals that rock the birds in trees
Bring down a jaunty man in grief.
Uncatchable breaths thereby annotate
The death of a martyr drowning awake.





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