作者MrWednesday (Who's ur daddy?)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Of Facebook
時間Wed Oct 12 00:47:41 2011
Many have remembered him as one
of the walking dead, whom they say only
perceive their livings in an eternal present.
Time never lapse in that dimension.
Joyful it is for them,
but they never learnt
the cruelty of their existence.
Living in a lie that mesmerizes
the lotus eater.
Suffering the fate of them who
Are condemned to burn eternally
In the deep abyss of Tartarus.
But never did he knows.
He lived his whole life in a fictitious world,
Reality was to him an unintelligble concept
because in Reality he never lived.
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初次創作，見笑了。
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推 korn31910:Not bad at all 10/12 06:01
推 spacedunce5:wonderful poetic depth! but i have to be annoying 10/12 08:30
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推 hahastarr:Welcome! :D 10/12 09:14
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