[創作] Poetic

[PowLluimniz (波西米亞)]

 They say it's a process: whichever vein I choose,
 the blood must converge into the major ones.

 They say it's circular: whichever end I choose,
 the arch must conform into the other one.

 They say it's not poetry: too little imagery,
 metaphors, symbols, and plurality.

 True. All very true. Only
 they ignore that all blood goes to the heart;
 all archs dance in a circle;
 and it's my life, yes, it's not poetic.


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