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這是我學弟寫的 他請我幫忙評析 不過... 不曉得該從何評起會比較好... I am locked Within your heart I am as free as a kite Gliding in your sky Riding the breeze driven by the virtue of Grace Sparkling with the twinkling eyes of Naughty A candle from the paradise of orange Light up my mortal life And sustain the tenuto melodies woven by our love For good -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.217.4.109