精華區beta poetry 關於我們 聯絡資訊
where am I? it's hollowed out walking by passersby in a still dark night blinded by your disguise flashing white lights drowned my voice and throw shadows on your ceramic face and who am I? lose count of time the very best that I can offer, is rotten in your eyes Somehow the one who understands me at best, fails you are but a woman, grown out of your youth, grown out of our youth, grown out of our memories and worn off my love -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.113.95.204
spacedunce5:!!!! 04/24 08:39
spacedunce5:very good poetic thought! but i guess the language 04/25 00:29
spacedunce5:could be improved? 04/25 00:29