[創作] i will not say goodbye

[spacedunce5 (CJ)]

you never say goodbye
it's always me kept waiting in suspense
but the axe never falls

so when you say you must leave
rarely as you do before i do
i will not say goodbye
and be lost in your rush to go
without a backward glance
at my forlorn figure
standing here
waiting

no.

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推 hahastarr:You! Be a man!
推 frolicker:i agree with hahastarr!XDD this poem is indeed more
→ frolicker:feminine than the ones u wrote before, which makes
→ frolicker:it seem like hahastarr's work~XD however, i wrote
→ frolicker:all the feminine poems, but i'm GAY! XDDDDD
→ spacedunce5:1F: too much stand-up lol
→ spacedunce5:gay, no; emasculated...maybe XD
→ frolicker:wow...such an irritating word that reveals male
→ frolicker:chauvinism!
推 dieEule:bull's eye!
→ spacedunce5:樓上在同意哪句？= =
→ spacedunce5:frolicker可以去看看masculine studies
推 dieEule:the revealing of male chauvinism comment
→ frolicker:一直以來都是學feminist studies沒學masculine studies,
→ frolicker:但剛剛看了一下,仍覺得這是個male chauvinistic word,認
→ frolicker:為男性沒有男子氣概是被"去雄",會這樣想的前題就是把陽
→ frolicker:剛特質視為較優等,但是身為女性化的男人,我不認為我的心
→ frolicker:理性別傾向是起因於"較弱勢",而陽性與陰性間也不應該存
→ frolicker:在任何的power relationship,所以我不認同這個字眼,就用
→ frolicker:feminization吧! My gender is female, not emasculated
→ frolicker:male! and i really doubt this word. (i'll do more
→ frolicker:research.)
→ spacedunce5:我提到男性研究與此討論串無關啦……
→ spacedunce5:抱歉讓你誤會了= =
→ spacedunce5:i think the word you want is effeminate?
→ hahastarr:*默默抱著爆米花觀望*
→ spacedunce5:emasculate = ex + masculate
→ spacedunce5:effeminate = in + feminate; different roots
→ frolicker:其實我知道你只是在開玩笑啦! 我只是很訝異竟然會有一個
→ frolicker:這麼男權主義的字,我是針對字不是你,甭認真跟我道歉= =
→ frolicker:可以說effeminate吧 或是feminine, queen...隨便啦!XDD