作者wwords (Danny)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Elegy of myself
時間Wed Jan 5 01:12:06 2011
A rose by any other name would smell as sweet
and so is death
Like opium overwhelmed me with sweet tenderness
as I lingering on my last breath
“Join me tonight…”
Softly he whispered in my ear
“Drink from me and to eternity…”
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