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The endless drop falls deeply in my heart
as your lips gently meet my cheeks
With your confusing tears I embrace the painful fear
And the drops have flown so far
Till your sadness never more collects at my brows
to seize the happiness we had found.
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這是在上課時亂寫的情詩
不過 每次看完自己的作品都覺得很蠢
我也只能不斷地練習 讓自己技巧更好
還需要靠多讀來琢磨...
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