[創作] Labyrinth

[yuuyh (倒吊人)]

Distant lights slowly
sink into the horizon,
and this known world
gradually deterritorializes itself
into a thousand winding walls
and another thousand forking paths without end...


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Clov: Finished, it's finished, nearly finished, it must be nearly finshed.

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推 spacedunce5:brave use of deterritorialization! XD
→ yuuyh:I happened to find it a better word XD
推 hecati:Welcome to Life! :D Nice job, by the way.
→ yuuyh:Thx. I find this one particularly hard to write. The
→ yuuyh:title explains everything... I need some comments...
推 hecati:on Life?
→ yuuyh:Ha ha~ It's just this poem seems to resist being written
→ yuuyh:down almost successfully. This is the only bit I got.
推 hecati:I understand. But I've been told that "real art cannot
→ hecati:be captured in words." (?)