※ 引述《jc ( )》之銘言：
: BLUEGRASS MUSICIAN BILL MONROE,
:( WHOSE REPERTORY, VUEWS ON MUSICIAL COLLABORATION,
: AND VOCAL STYLE INFLUENCED GENERATIONS OF BLUEGRASS ARTISTS,)
: ALSO INSPIRE MANY MUSICIANS,
: INCLUDING ELVIS PRESLEY AND JERRY GARCIA,
: WHOSE MUSIC DIFFERED SINGNIFICANTLY FROM HIS OWN.
: 請問第四行ALSO前面為什麼不用加連接詞?
: 謝謝
把括弧部份遮起來,
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe also inspired many musicians, including ....
中間whose引導的句子是擾亂用的(就做題而言)..
所以不用加連接詞,本來就是ㄧ句完整的句子.
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作者: polarbear (好熱) 看板: studyabroad
標題: Re: [問題] 請教AT修辭的問題
時間: Fri Jun 18 14:48:10 2004
※ 引述《wisweet (修行人生)》之銘言：
: 我想順便問一下
: 這一題的答案a.
我個人是覺得超多贅詞的...參考看看..
: Bluegrass musican Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration
: , and vocal style
: were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration
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用influenced就可,be動詞加形容詞太複雜. ㄧ樣,also inspired就好
: to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose
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: music differed significantly from his own.
: 其中that如果改成who,除了可能犯了wordy的錯誤之外,其句意可通嗎?
恩,其實我是沒看過用 (,who included) 的用法, 好像是語意不清吧,
因為前面的句子中有 Bill Monroe 及 musicians可當who的先行詞,
所以who指誰,不清楚.
不過學藝不精,只能這樣討論,因為都是習慣就是(,including)就好,
沒想過那麼多..:P
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