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: Acid rain and snow result from the chemical reactions between industrial
: emissions of sulfur dioxide and nitrogen oxides with atmospheric water
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: vapor to produce highly corrosive sulfuric and nitric acids.
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: (C) and atmospheric water vapor which has produced highly corrosive sulfuric
: and nitric acids
: (E) and atmospheric water vapor to produce highly corrosive sulfuric and
: nitric acids
: e是對的
: 想請問c跟a錯在哪裡
A: between A and B ，不可用with
C: which 有dangling之嫌，原句意應指 reactions，在此因用has
亦即替代 atmospheric water vapor ，造成句意改變
: A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: (B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star
: will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
: (D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant
: stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black
: hole.
: d是對的 請問b為何錯
: 謝謝
B 也是典型的dangling，passing之動作為 a star所為，中間插入一句
depending on its mass，破壞修飾結構，且its不知指何物，無適當先行詞
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作者: Jeffeson8 (你有你的人生) 看板: studyabroad
標題: Re: 請問幾題gmat修辭
時間: Thu Nov 11 20:30:26 2004
※ 引述《kify (u r making a scene)》之銘言：
: : A: between A and B ，不可用with
: 我以為是between sulfur dioxide and nitrogen oxides
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: 原來是between sulfur dioxide and nitrogen oxides and atmospheric water
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: 請問要怎麼分他的between是哪兩個
: 謝謝
完全是看句意決定，因為二氧化硫跟一氧化氮都是工業廢氣
它們之間的 reactions 並不會造成酸雨
正所謂八分句意，二分文法，老莫說能突破句意這一關
也就突破700了
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