作者abmne (memoriesaway)
看板TeachEnglish
標題[其他] 請教其他英文老師一起研究
時間Tue Aug 5 12:25:45 2008
各位好
小弟日前在花蓮遊覽時看到一份行政院國家風景區英文文宣
仔細一看
發現有個地方有些問題
想拿來版上跟各位英文老師一起研究一下
原文如下
The East Coast National Scenic Area was authorized by the Executive Yuan, ROC,
as Taiwan's second national scenic area in 1987. Its territory is a strip of
land and ocean which lies mainly on the east side of the coastal range of
Taiwan from the Hualien River mouth in the north to Siaoyeliou near Taitung in
the south, and also include the Siouguluan river white water rafting segment
located below Rueisuei as well as Green Island.
想請教一下各位
倒數第二行的include是不是應該變成includes比較合理?
謝謝各位賜教了...
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