[問題] 請英文高手幫我看一下

[cabcab (歡迎聊聊~~~~)]

不知po在這裡對不對
如有違反版規請告知..謝謝

因我最近要找工作..怕面試時會叫我用英文簡單的自我介紹
但我英文很破..怕字或是文法有誤
請想高手幫我看一下有沒有問題

I am OOO XXX is my English name I graduate in XXX
I come from a well-to-do family.
我叫OOO XXX是我的英文名 我畢業於 XXX 來自小康家庭

I am a shy girl through appearance seems very cold on the
individual character, in fact, I am a very easy person who got along.
我的個性內向,雖然我看起來很冷酷,但事實上我是一個很隨和的人

I think optimistic are the recommendation it makes me not disanimate when
I met a problem.
我的優點是很樂觀,樂觀的個性使我遇到挫折可以馬上站起來

From now on no matter what the working contact I will work harder and harder
and complete the work smoothly.
今後無論工作內容為何,我都會努力學習,並且順利完成工作

要是我自己翻得很爛不要笑我啊~~~~
麻煩大家了..謝謝


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