[分享] 英檢的作文

[ppeach (水貨)]

這是我學生的作文 (沒有改過的) ...她去年的6月考的 98分

Sam had the test today but he didn't study yesterday. Last night,

he spent two hours watching the TV programs. besides, he turned on the

computer. Then, he surfed the Net. He played all night but he didn't study.

That let him get the bad grade, so he thought he must study hard next time.

我當初是給她40分啦  因為 1. spend + V-ing的句型
                         2. 文章的連接詞用的不錯



另一篇 (同一人/ 沒有批改過的原文 )

Last night, when my mom and I went home and we found a stray dog on the

street. The stray dog looked sad. Then, my mom and I tool it to see the vet.

And I asked my mom "Can I let it to be my pet"? And my mom said "Yes!" to me.

Now, we are good friends and I play with it every day.

我給 30 分
因為 1. when 之後的子句有錯...
     2. let 用法有錯...


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