[解題] 關於形容詞字句

[dantee (小麗)]

在改學生作文時發現了一個問題想要請教各位老師們

學生的句子:

The boy noticed the picture on the wall which was a robber.

他想要表達的意思是說

"小男孩發現牆上有一幅畫，是個robber的照片"(就是所謂的Wanted的通緝海報)

但我印象中學的形容詞子句必須直接接在要修飾的人事物後面

像她這樣寫就變成修飾wall而不是picture

想請問一下各位有什麼方式可以改麼? ^^||

例如改成

The boy noticed that on the wall there was a picture which was a robber.

好像長了一點="= 但我把on the wall調到前面了

請問這樣可以嗎?

或是各位老師們有沒有什麼其他的方式?

先謝謝各位!<(_ _)>

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推 Topanga:一定要用形容詞子句嗎? The boy noticed the picture of a
→ Topanga:robber on the wall.
推 sweeties:推樓上  這樣簡單易懂多了
推 jainly:XXX niticed that on the wall was a picture of a robber.
→ jainly: on the wall跟 there 不是要加個逗號嘛，那乾脆刪掉嘍
推 jainly:這個句子用一樓老師的形容詞片語會比較適合 :)
推 super15:如果是我我可能會寫The boy noticed that there was a
→ super15:picture of a robber on the wall
推 djnospam:"a picture"本身不會是"a robber"所以原po那樣子寫意思不