[請益] 文法檢查

[KurakiMaki (Maki)]

這是我參考網路別人的寫法自己整理重寫的，請問文法上面有錯誤嗎？
黃色部分是我覺得比較有可能錯的，空格是用來放名詞子句的
還請大家幫忙檢查一下～謝謝

The reading passage and the speaker both discuss the topic of _____.
However, the speaker disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage.
He thinks that _____ in the reading passage is questionable and offers
several reasons to oppose the article.

First of all, the reading passage mentions that _____, and therefore _____.
But the speaker says that _____. Thus, the speaker believes _____.

The second reason which the lecturer refers to a disproof is that _____.
Although the article states _____, he notes that _____.
Hence, the lecturer concludes that _____.

Finally, the author of reading passage claims that _____, whereas
the orator points out that _____. As a result, the orator considers that _____,
and that contradicts what the reading passage indicates.

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→ BuchPreis: claim我認為不妥 畢竟文章不會claim 其他文法OK
→ BuchPreis: 應該是TOEFL模板吧 用字可以多變化一點 再加長結論段
謝謝～
→ dunchee: http://www.macmillandictionary.com/  輸入 claim
→ dunchee: 第一個例句
謝謝～這個英文字典蠻好的耶～還有例句XD，之前看好多都沒例句
claim的用法我是抄某網站的，應該問題不大，謝囉
→ BuchPreis: 不不不 report或技術文獻之類的當然能用claim 但用在
→ BuchPreis: reading passage 我個人是覺得怪 要是堅持用CL 我是會
→ BuchPreis: 寫成the author of the reading passage claims...
→ BuchPreis: 還能順便湊字數~
→ BuchPreis: 對了 你後面用orator 前面也用"人"會比較好喔
謝謝～我改好了
→ wohtp: "several reasons to opposite the article"?
→ wohtp: opposite是形容詞喔
→ wohtp: 即使改成oppose也很怪。雖然to oppose的確是「反對」的意思
→ wohtp: 但是帶有「抵抗」的含意。
→ wohtp: 一篇文章又沒強制力，就算你反對其論點也不到抵抗那麼嚴重
→ wohtp: 我會說"...offers several counter-arguments..."
→ wohtp: 啊，這裡用"opposing arguments"也可以。因為是你的論點對
→ wohtp: 抗他的論點。
您好，因為是文章提出一個論點，而speaker提出反對的觀點
這樣應該符合您說的[抵抗]含意吧？請問您打的是which is opposing的簡化嗎
不好意思，文法沒很好XD，謝謝你提出來～網路上是打opposite...我沒發現這是形容詞
※ 編輯: KurakiMaki (114.47.132.130), 08/17/2014 22:33:19