[文法] 幫忙看是否文法有誤

[qqptt (夢想)]

Dear all:

This friday will open meeting by Michael sir.

So I need update your report before thursday

Please put your report in addrest:

//172.16.18.2

Thanks


這是要收集相關部門報告給自己彙整的一封信

請問是否正確? 感激

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→ monkeywife: 你第一次寫英文信嗎? 錯誤有點多耶 可能要整篇重寫orz
推 kkotokyo: 基本文法都錯了，好像我在科技業用的英文
→ nastry: Since it is my turn to hold a meeting on this Friday,
→ nastry: I need all of you to upload your ppt to //172.16.18.2
→ nastry: by this Thursday.