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※ 引述《retsuy ( 黃金左腳,阿貝)》之銘言：
: 原本想用英文寫的
: 覺得用英文比較順 不過想想在鄉民中 還是用中文好了
單純討論英文~~~
: I got hurt in some churches and I hate those people.
get hurt 在我的語感上比較偏向肉體上的傷害
我是建議用humiliate來描述會比較好
church的複數形感覺是在說地點 又配前面got hurt
我看起來是像某些教會的建築物跌倒還是幹嘛導致身體受傷
所以討厭這些人
不過我想他想表達的是教會的成員讓他感到受傷
我覺得是不是要寫成
I hate some church members who humiliate me.
: They pretend to be they are kind and so faithful for God.
: But I can see their inner hearts are so greedy and selfish.
這裡用 see 很奇怪 see比較指看到某個有形體的事物
我覺得要用realize
另外這句似乎有雙動詞的問題? see與are
我會寫成
But I realize their inner hearts with greedy and selfish .
: They just want to get more and more favors form Lord.
: But that's right that they admit they are sinners.
: And I think it's not worthy of being with those people for me.
: The conclusion is God will punish them till they implore their sins.
: And I forgive these sinners because God will punish their sins.
: Amen!
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