推 kf024606: 謝謝! 01/27 10:08
※ 引述《kf024606 (當浪來了…A )》之銘言：
: The carpentry industry is going down in recent years in Puli,
[1] in Puli has (recently) been in decline, and so [2]
: the young carpenter came back to his hometown Puli and wanted
[3] looking
: to continue the familys' carpentry by industrial restructuring.
to revitalize(?) his family's legacy through indus...
: By now, they have many areas such as carpentry classroom,
Now, they have established many complementary services[4], such as a
carpentry...
: creative shops, and recreation area. Tourists can have more
^a recreational a better
: understanding of the culture of wood industry in Puli Township
[1]
: by visiting this building.
: 以上…還請各位協助過目。
: 提外話：有人猜的出來是哪個地方嗎？
^^題 (XD)
1. carpentry 一般泛指建築、家具等(粗)木工，不包含木雕。
建議用更廣義的 woodworking。
2. 各句子之間要連接，而且要交代因果關係
3. 前面有提過這位 young carpenter 是誰嗎？沒有的話不能用 the。
4. services 感覺還是有點不對(但 areas 更不行)，不知其他大大有何建議？
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