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標題Re: [求譯] 肯請幫看英文履歷有無不當的地方
時間Thu Mar 12 13:35:45 2015
※ 引述《LiMei (LiMei)》之銘言:
: 小妹不才,第一次撰寫英文履歷,
: 經驗不是很豐富,用字上不知道正不正確,
: 希望大家有空幫我看一下~~~
: m(_ _)m
如果妳想面試外商的話這樣寫絕對會掛掉(履歷直接被忽略)
建議找標準美式 CV 當範本整個重寫一次
Profile 不要 I 來 I 去的看起來非常像小學生作文
如果不是妳難道是別人?如果可以盡量省略人稱並用第三人稱的角度來寫
另外一定會有英文面試,一定要先練習到能自我介紹講得很順
妳的強項是什麼,公司請妳有什麼好處,講到對方覺得公司不請妳是損失
如果是台商或假外商那文法修一修就好了,反正也沒人看
能找到認識的人幫妳送履歷進去才是最重要的
: 以下:
: Profile
: My name is XXX. I was born in Taiwan, on Oct.12, 19xx.
: I graduated from National Cheng-Chi University, and my major was in computer science.
X 用 was 就不要 in 了
: My family only have two people. My mother work in a travel agency and I just left my current position to find a software job.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 中式英文出現了
然後重點是 Irrelevant 的東西盡量不要出現,妳家只有兩個人,然後?如果沒有要 elaborate 乾脆不要寫
而且以外商而言 They don't want to know anything personal about you. None of their business.
嚴格一點連照片都不可以夾
: I have touched on information technology for seven years. I'm interested in web-page development, mobile app development, software testing.
^^^^^^^ 不要用 touch
如果這邊還不想寫得很具體可以用 Experienced in,不過以 CV 來說 experienced in 有時候嫌太模糊
: In terms of personality I am optimistic, responsible and careful.
: Experience
: ASSISTANT OF MIS, NATIONAL CHENGCHI UNIVERSITY ,TAIPEI — 20XX-20XX
: 1. Supported and maintained the elective system on a college's website. 2. Helped teachers to manage their information resources.
妳是要寫選課系統? elective system 很難懂,建議寫成 course registration system
另外 support maintain help 都太模糊了,可以的話建議寫具體一點的工作職掌、內容、成果
: RESEARCH ASSISTANT, ACADEMIA SINICA, TAIPEI — 20XX-20XX
: 1. Joined a team project about researching Secure Multi-Party Computation, implementing the system framework.
: 2. Wrote test cases on this system to solve the real world problems.
Sinica 的部份也一樣,妳要寫到讓不認識妳的人一眼可以看出來妳到底做過什麼
我是系統廠工程師,但也看不懂妳這部份的經歷是什麼
剩下的妳再想想吧
: RELEVANT COURSEWORK
: 1. Advanced software programming, Software engineering, Compiler Design, System Analysis.
: THESIS
: 1. Master’s: Adding Function to a Protocol Description Language for Secure Multi-Party Computation
: 2. Bachelor’s: Linux Online Examination System
: Education
: M.S., Computer Science, 20XX National Cheng-Chi University, Taipei
: B.S., Computer Science, 20XX Chinese Culture University, Taipei
: Skills
: Programming
: 1. C/C++, Java, Ruby, Python, JavaScript, MySQL, XML, HTML
: Language
: 1. English (TOEIC 570, LTTC English-speaking for over one year.)
: 2. Chinese
: 3. Taiwanese
: Office software
然後還有就是從這篇裡面完全看不出妳的強項
不是列出來會 C/Java/Ruby/Python/Web 這樣就夠了
找 Web 的工作在 Skill/Ability 的部份可以列出妳熟悉怎樣的技術
會什麼 Framework,熟前端還是後端或 full stack
Mobile App 的話有沒有寫過 Android/iPhone App,有沒有作品可以參考
否則妳這樣的履歷會非常的不吸引人
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