[請益] 梅子炒飯食譜

[danny901203 (Danny)]

http://i.imgur.com/aaXnJ9N.jpg

請各位幫我檢查哪裡有文法或單字錯誤的地方
或者哪裡有更好的說法及用法

謝謝！！

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→ softseaweed: 打上來吧... 最起碼調一下圖片角度
→ dunchee: materials(x)-> http://tinyurl.com/87yaoua
→ dunchee: the water ... is "over"(? 不知要你要表達什麼)
→ dunchee: spill(x http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/spill_1
→ dunchee: https://youtu.be/mxGDOGdIh7Q 約 1:05處 rice ... it
→ dunchee: has to be cold ....
→ dunchee: https://youtu.be/4x8yiRQK2as 約 1:20處 .... bone dry
→ dunchee:   (直接講dry也行)
→ dunchee: https://youtu.be/hlMi44W7-BQ
→ danny901203: 謝謝