[求譯] 請幫忙協助文法是否正確

[icerose (泡泡)]

    Bill 成績優異因此在2017年一月提前一學期獲得學位。

    翻譯如下:

    Bill has completed all required credits with outstanding grades


    and obtained the Bachelor of Business in January 2017 one semester


    in advance.


    請問one semester可以直接放在最後面嗎?還是需要在年份後面加上逗號?

    還是有其他更好的翻法?

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推 shitlock: graduated a semester early in January 2017