[文法] 四個句子文法問題請教

[henry9102017 (小豬仔)]

請教版上大神們一些文法問題
如下所示

文句來源:
NEW TOICE TEST 金色證書 – 字彙 (眾文圖書公司)
P191.
On August 31, 2008, the Public Utilities Commission authorized Fargo Power
and Gas to restructure the rates it charges both business and residential
customers.
這句話是不是文法有錯誤?
同時有兩個動詞 authorized 和 charges
補上圖片
http://i.imgur.com/TgpcRSi.jpg

P100.
Southbound is moving at a moderate pace.
Southbound 字典顯示不是名詞
如此使用是不是錯誤?
補上圖片
http://i.imgur.com/Sir9WrY.jpg

P113.
The seminar will also offer tips for preparing the building should any such
event occur.
小弟我無法了解此句should的用法
補上圖片
http://i.imgur.com/gIvrzdD.jpg

P117.
This means that we must strive to avoid making even the most minute of
mistakes.
請問有”the most minute of mistakes”的用法嗎?
字典顯示minute做為”微小的”解釋時為形容詞
感覺應該是把of刪掉比較正確
即the most minute mistakes
補上圖片
http://i.imgur.com/2UIpC9W.jpg

P121.
My words may sound grand, but they are fitting, for his achievements as
director have not been surpassed.
請問have前面是不是少了主詞?
補上圖片
http://i.imgur.com/KPtUAkj.jpg

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推 naushtogo: 可以拍照 P100, P191, P121 嗎? 沒有上下文不好判斷。
→ naushtogo: P113, should可以完全用if替換，最簡單的理解方式。
→ naushtogo: 用should可以讓人感覺更正式一點，書面英語常用。
※ 編輯: henry9102017 (111.252.114.50), 06/24/2017 21:34:53
→ naushtogo: P117, 如果你要把of刪掉，那mistakes的複數s也要刪掉，
→ naushtogo: 可以把原文看成 the most minute (mistake) of (all
→ naushtogo: the) mistakes.
→ henry9102017: 謝謝您 我把圖片補上去了
→ henry9102017: 謝謝naushtogo大大 這樣解釋 p113瞬間懂了 ^^
推 naushtogo: 補充一下P113,原文 = if any such event should occur.
→ naushtogo: 所以occur用原型動詞。
→ naushtogo: 你要把should拿掉，occur加s也可以，只是前者比較正式
→ naushtogo: P121, My words may sound grand, but they are
→ naushtogo: fitting,(which) have not been surpassed for his
→ naushtogo: achievements as director.
→ naushtogo: P100, Southbound 這裡指 I-580 southbound，英文很不
→ naushtogo: 喜歡重複同樣的東西，尤其前面剛提到。
推 naushtogo: P191一樣省略which，...rates (which) it charges...
→ naushtogo: 這裡的it指Fargo Power and Gas
→ dunchee:   goo.gl/JKUBZS
→ naushtogo: P121,dunchee大大才是對的，我先去面壁...
→ henry9102017: 謝謝兩位大神