[文法] help 用法

[sean72 (.)]

It is a great sense of achievement knowing your product creates solution for
people to help them making better choices.

to help them making better choices
or
to help them make better choices

又請問
這句話是否有點繞口，或是可以怎麼修改?

謝謝

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推 EVASUKA: 覺得your solution helps them make better choices即可
推 EVASUKA: 比較簡潔(如果你不要拗口)，product本身就是一種solution
推 cyndilin: for people to help them... 很囉唆，又沒指定特地群，
→ cyndilin: 直接 help people 就好
→ cyndilin: a great sense of achievement 用這這裡，有點不倫不類
→ cyndilin: 的，了解你的產品，成就達成？！如果是了解一個可以獲得
→ cyndilin: 諾貝爾獎的產品，也許我會有滿滿的成就感 XD
→ tulian: It is a great achievement that your product helps
→ tulian: people make better choices
推 gentianpan: 推tulian 的。英文較直接講成就。很多英翻中常為了順
→ gentianpan: 口把achievement翻成成就感，用邏輯直翻反譯回來英文
→ gentianpan: 就怪。