[請益] 回信給廠商，請幫我看看有無錯誤

[koizumisyou (不小的挑戰)]

Thank you for your replying
感謝您的回覆

I have been looking for this machine for ages
我找這台機器找很久了

and for now you are the only supplier which may have
而且目前你們是唯一可能有這台機器的供應商

I do hope there will be good news
我非常希望有好消息

CPU 80HZ or 66HZ would be acceptable as long as it's Type7011 model 250
CPU 80或66HZ都可以，只要是 Type7011 model 250

By the way do you provide service for delivery to Taiwan?
對了你們有提供送貨到台灣的服務嗎?

I am looking forward to your reply
期待您的回信

Best regards
Peter

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推 kasimtojenny: 都沒打句點XDDD看了小彆扭哈哈
→ koizumisyou: OK，除了句點有無不通順的地方可以幫忙嗎?
→ deerwings: 234句其實可以省略(只是客套話而已)
→ koizumisyou: 謝謝
→ naushtogo: Thank you for your reply.
→ naushtogo: shipping to Taiwan
→ koizumisyou: 感謝指正
推 angelofdeath: 我有疑問 為什麼你開頭是用your replying 後面卻用
→ angelofdeath: your reply XDDD
→ ggirls: have 是及物？
推 stedy: 我是對方看到第三句我會提高我的報價
推 cphe: 2 3 4都可以省下來，有講沒講其實沒差，廠商要賺錢的，你是
→ cphe: 客戶不需要如此客氣
→ cphe: 期待回信也不用寫...求職信才會這樣寫...
→ koizumisyou: 感謝各位先進指教