[請益] 明天一起XXX 是先together還是tomorrow?

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我要寫信給客戶 客戶兩個訂單 一起出給海運承攬商

We will ship your cars & parts order to your SEA forwarder together tomorrow.

還是

.......... to your SEA forwarder tomorrow together.

哪一個才是對的順序阿? 謝謝

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→ kangan987: 把中文打出來吧 這樣大家才有參考可以翻譯。
→ millieyao: 我感覺把together放在句尾距離太遠了~tomorrow放最後吧
→ mohiwa: 其實…不加together也可以吧,你前面都寫出and了
推 famhapp123: 可以不用together 會有點中文英文 因為前面寄A和B已經
→ famhapp123: 就是一起了
推 fatfree: 時間最後
→ pierli: 兩個都很怪~Tomorrow可放在句首
→ pierli: together放句尾
推 kee32: Together, we will go our way. Together, we will leave s
→ kee32: omeday. by PSB
推 alixia: Your car order will be shipped along with the parts or
→ alixia: der to SEA forwarder tomorrow.