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中文:我負責的三件專案皆順利完成客戶的需求並導入量產

英文:I was responsible for three projects, all met customer requirements
and went into mass production.

請問這樣翻譯是否有不順的地方?

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推 kreis414: 連接詞呢？
→ kreis414: （或關代，如果原文沒有連接詞）
推 cuylerLin: 感覺起來這裡的量產應該是 pilot run 而不是 mass
→ cuylerLin: production? 我會譯成 All three projects that I was
→ cuylerLin: responsible for met customer demands/requirements
→ cuylerLin: and were ready for new production introduction.
→ hlin12: polit run 是試產啊……