[請益] 中式英文之鑑的應用(觀念)疑義

[neiltsang (楚留香雞排)]

如題

最近稍微讀了   中式英文之鑑  這本書  發現很多錯誤應糾正的觀念

不過以下三句  我不確定分析與更改的正確與否:


1)Fortunately, I’ve never been asked to give this explanation
to my students in class.


2)I personally think Danny is an entitled immature idiot.


3)You must have a reason for that sense of entitlement.


以此書的觀念  我想把以上三句改正為:

1)Fortunately, I’ve never required to explan this to my students.

2)I think Danny is an entitled immature idiot.

3)You must feel entitled conditionally.


看過書的話應該就知道我更動的原因是基於什麼理由

想請問是否這樣修正以後  比較native了呢 ~

謝謝

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Well,as long as the answer sounds reasonble,it doesn't really matter who give it.
As I post this question, it could be answered by ANYone who is a native speaker RiGhT on HERE.
Probably, you are one of them.lol.
Are you encouraging people to solve questions by doing researh on their own?
Make sense,BUT thanks.
推 euruing: @o@ 遇到大神的感覺
※ 編輯: neiltsang (61.220.255.143 臺灣), 06/30/2021 03:12:52