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[trtr112 (pk)]

 想請教各位先進,

有一個句子:

This place has no real valley, Lazaridis says of Waterloo, and very little
silicon. But he believes it can become what he describes as the
world’s “quantum hub.”


 請問我可以說:

This place has no real valley when Lazaridis says of Waterloo,and…. (加入

 when, 去掉velley 之後的逗點).

  這樣的改法是可以的嗎?

   謝謝!

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推 cuylerLin: 跟語氣或意見表達相關的動詞，例如 say, claim, think,
→ cuylerLin:  propose, maintain, qualify, suppose, suggest 等諸
→ cuylerLin: 多動詞，可以直接放在兩個逗號之間視為插入語（parenth
→ cuylerLin: etical phrase）的結構原本是 as-clause。所以此例還原
→ cuylerLin: 應為「(as) Lazaridis says of Waterloo」。
→ cuylerLin: 或者最簡單的理解直接看成對話內容，把上下引號補回去
→ cuylerLin: 。
推 kilva: This place has no real valley and very little silicon.
→ kilva: 這整句話都是Lazaridis提到Waterloo時說的