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想請教各位, 有個問題想請教您, 以下的這個句子是我自己造的: The citizens of that area have long ignored the threat of air pollution, causing their health to become worse year by year. 想請問: 1. causing 也可寫成 ,which causes; 指的是ignoring 這件事. (不知是否正確?) 2. 如果我想要說明的是 air pollution 這個現像, 那這在個句子中, 我要怎麼用關 代來修飾呢? (是不是就用 which causes; which 前面不加逗點, 不知是否正確) 謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 163.17.183.7 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1693267323.A.6C9.html
imsphzzz: which causes→which指的是air pollution 08/29 16:22
imsphzzz: , which causes →指的是整件事 08/29 16:24
ppm467: 1. Air pollution has long been ignored by the citizens 09/02 05:40
ppm467: of that region, which is causing their health to dete 09/02 05:40
ppm467: riorate. 09/02 05:40
ppm467: 2. The citizens of that area have long ignored the thr 09/02 05:41
ppm467: eat of air pollution, a phenomenon that causes their h 09/02 05:41
ppm467: ealth to deteriorate over time. 09/02 05:41
ppm467: 3. There has long been an apathy to the threat of air 09/02 05:41
ppm467: pollution, which is causing the health of the people i 09/02 05:41
ppm467: n that area to deteriorate year after year. 09/02 05:41
ppm467: 4. The residents of that region have long ignored the 09/02 05:41
ppm467: threat posed by air pollution, a phenomenon which has 09/02 05:41
ppm467: led to a decline in their health over the years. 09/02 05:41
ppm467: 5. This area's citizens have long ignored the threat o 09/02 05:41
ppm467: f air pollution, which is causing their health to dete 09/02 05:41
ppm467: riorate each year. 09/02 05:41
ppm467: 6. There has long been an ignoring of the threat of ai 09/02 05:41
ppm467: r pollution in that area, which is resulting in worsen 09/02 05:41
ppm467: ing health conditions. 09/02 05:41
ppm467: 7. Air pollution, the phenomenon that causes the citiz 09/02 05:41
ppm467: ens' health to worsen each year, has long been ignored 09/02 05:41
ppm467: by the residents of this area. 09/02 05:41
ppm467: 8. There has been a longstanding disregard on the part 09/02 05:41
ppm467: of the residents of that area for the threat of air p 09/02 05:41
ppm467: ollution, which is becoming a more significant problem 09/02 05:41
ppm467: every year. 09/02 05:41
ppm467: 9. Historically, the citizens of that area have neglec 09/02 05:41
ppm467: ted to address the threat of air pollution, a phenomen 09/02 05:41
ppm467: on that has aggravated their health over time. 09/02 05:41