用那台伴你成長的腳踏車

[lin91223 (Catherine de Medici)]

When I taught you
at eight to ride
a bicycle, loping along
beside you
as you wobbled away
on two round wheels,
my own mouth rounding
in surprise when you pulled
ahead down the curved
path of the park,
I kept waiting
for the thud
of your crash as I
sprinted to catch up,
while you grew
smaller, more breakable
with distance,
pumping, pumping
for your life, screaming
with laughter,
the hair flapping
behind you like a
handkerchief waving
goodbye.

昨天小雪貼ㄉ那個害阿肥想到

有人知道這個ㄇ

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推 TzuyuChou117: wobble跟pump用得真不錯
噓 trolkin: When I am down and oh my soul so weary
→ celtics1997: Tqis ls an penis ,
→ lin91223: 怎麼縮ㄚ
推 TzuyuChou117: 有那種一開始很蹣跚笨拙 到小屁孩想暴衝的動態感
→ lin91223: 我是覺得breakable讓我有你怎麼會出現在這裡的感覺 但
→ lin91223: 後來覺ㄉ其實很搭
推 TzuyuChou117: 可可
→ lin91223: 我覺得整ㄍ就是很有畫面感 而且很好懂
推 TzuyuChou117: 好媽媽的畫面
→ lin91223: 為什麼不是把拔 是因為揮手帕嗎
→ lin91223: 揮手帕好像是媽媽才會想到ㄉ畫面
推 TzuyuChou117: 如果是爸爸應該會說「Yooooo niiice son u finally
→ TzuyuChou117:  learn to ride this mofo」
→ TzuyuChou117: 然後跟兒子一起暴衝
→ lin91223: 好壞ㄛ
推 TzuyuChou117: :))