[寫作] 麻煩各位了~

[hanlai870711 (Han Lai)]

假設這是你到美國去當交換學生的第一堂課,請寫一篇自我介紹。
(1)你的姓名,就讀的學校,來自的國家。
(2)表達你對這次當交換學生的期望。

? ? ? ? My dear classmates and friends.This is the first time I'm coming after
 from my country to your esteemed school. I feel honored to be an exchange stu
dent here, and please allow me to introduce myself. My name is Han from Taiwan
, a wonderful island in subtropical island with cozy weather all year long. Al
so, I am a third grade student at XXX and my major is XXX.

? ? ? ? Before coming, I set some goals for myself to show my determination an
d preservation. First, I would like to enhance my own ability in the field of
XXX. Secondly, I would like to participate in some activities to make some fri
ends here. Third, I would like to experience the difference cultures through i
nteracting with you. I'm a little bit shy,though. So if you see me on campus,
please say hello. That may help me feel more confident.



謝謝各位了~









































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推 jt910203: 其實我覺得看起來程度不錯 維持這篇水準應該可過
→ jt910203: 放輕鬆
推 jt910203: My name is Han from Taiwan.
→ jt910203: Taiwan is a wonderful  subtropical island with warm
→ jt910203: weather all year long.
→ jt910203: perservance
→ jt910203: Third, I would like to experience the difference cul
→ jt910203: 上句把 the去掉
→ jt910203: through後面的i也去掉
推 jt910203: difference 改成 different
真的很謝謝j大><
※ 編輯: hanlai870711 (223.136.72.254), 04/23/2016 07:51:37