噓 bobocatcat: 幻想甲文 42.77.134.118 09/23 02:14
噓 x284yk6cjo5: 三小 223.137.64.117 09/23 02:16
→ ThreekRoger: 報警阿,還是需要別人幫報警 114.27.179.33 09/23 02:17
→ nikewang: BL幻想文.... 黑道大哥我不要系列 211.192.127.61 09/23 02:17
推 firemothra: 重點是有沒有爽到 1.175.159.221 09/23 02:17
推 siahlin: 走韓漫BL狗血風 42.72.251.216 09/23 02:18
噓 myadam: 114.36.111.143 09/23 02:18
→ Takhisis: 寫成bl小說也賣不掉除非床戲很鹹濕 114.136.219.87 09/23 02:18
推 philibra: 建議加上槍戰場景比較有劇情張力 114.36.26.27 09/23 02:18
→ firemothra: 前傳可以補老大跟他爸的糾葛 1.175.159.221 09/23 02:19
→ lucifiel1618: 還在耳邊告訴你是他殺的,這年頭連 61.227.150.18 09/23 02:21
→ lucifiel1618: 小說都不這麼寫了,太古典了吧= = 61.227.150.18 09/23 02:21
→ christopherl: 好煩喔 111.243.91.243 09/23 02:24
噓 k4653: 超噁 106.64.104.78 09/23 02:26
→ DarkIllusion: 肛 1.175.85.100 09/23 02:27
→ wsmallmau: 幹 我還以為我進了tiger 114.46.192.35 09/23 02:27
噓 gginin7878: 甲的 1.171.105.232 09/23 02:29
噓 yuee: 寫這種幻想文的樂趣是? 有夠智缺 1.164.89.149 09/23 02:35
噓 TZUYIC: 幻想文你也轉過來,有點判斷能力好嗎!101.136.255.154 09/23 02:35
噓 ariz283: 幹拎娘 146.70.227.9 09/23 02:38
噓 coffeemilk: TT 1069色情小說連載嗎? 1.171.222.155 09/23 02:44
推 artwu: 冥冥之中這成語原來是這麼用的? 175.182.29.252 09/23 02:49
→ li72716: 用“很神奇的是” 看來應該是滿意的經驗 1.200.189.69 09/23 03:37
→ li72716: 2-3個穿西裝的女生..只能想到殯葬業 1.200.189.69 09/23 03:39
噓 ht91138: 滾 219.70.211.68 09/23 04:04
→ yw1002: 我堅強復國 114.24.134.198 09/23 05:21
推 byguy321: 這種稀爛的文筆...... 39.10.23.11 09/23 06:17
→ kansuzuri: 最後那段要不要修一下? 125.228.60.154 09/23 07:33
→ stevenpiglin: 惡甲 嘔嘔嘔嘔嘔114.140.121.133 09/23 07:59
噓 selfhu: 喔 42.76.216.3 09/23 10:39
推 ahw12000: 懶趴 223.139.146.26 09/23 12:09